Notes for Gemelo 44

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Gemelo 44

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Solver difficulty rating

2.5 based on 39 votes (voting is now closed)

You gave Gemelo 43 an average difficulty rating of 2.4, the same as that of its predecessor; I rated it slightly lower at 2.2, probably because I got a flying start with the two entries across the top and the one down the left-hand side.

This puzzle was not without its challenges, but, like other recent Gemelos, it offered several toeholds to the solver. A pleasant solve, but when are we going to get the promised clue-writing competition? Surely there has been time enough to get all the necessary arrangements set up, tested, and ready for launch. And to get a Gemelo bookplate produced, of course, though I feel that any trophy should probably be virtual.

Setters’ Corner: This week I’m going to look at clue 19d, “Dismissal after Stokes bowled over (7)”. A six-letter slang word for dismissal, specifically in the phrase ‘to get the ??????’, originally used to describe the dismissal or rejection of a lover, follows the usual abbreviation for ‘Stokes’ – well, actually for ‘stokes’. The July poll confirmed that many solvers are not bothered about words in clues being given false capitals, as with ‘stokes’ here, but I do feel that part of the setter’s art is wherever possible to misdirect while providing a cryptic reading which can be interpreted exactly as it is written. Sometimes it can be almost impossible to manoeuvre the word which requires a capital in the surface reading but not in the cryptic reading to the start of a sentence, and in such instances I have sympathy with the setter who adds a false capital, but often a bit of shuffling around is possible. The clue under consideration could have been written, for instance, as “Stokes, prior to dismissal, bowled over”. In these situations, I would encourage setters to look at how they can legitimately ‘hide’ the initial capital before resorting to the inclusion of a false capital.

Across

1a Dangerous habit of passing on tea in M&S from the back (12)
Gemelo starts off with a crafty wordplay where a five-letter ‘informal’ word for ‘passing’ or ‘approving’ follows (‘on’) a three-letter word for ‘tea’, the letters IN (from the clue), and the letters M and S reversed (‘from the back’). The answer is hyphenated, 5-7, and – since Chambersย  does not show the verbal noun – should ideally have been defined as a present participle by ‘pursuing dangerous habit’ or similar.

14a Led by power, classic Avenger rejects first picks (7)
I initially thought that the ‘classic Avenger’ who loses their first letter (‘rejects first’) and follows the usual abbreviation for ‘power’ might be John Steed, Cathy Gale or Emma Peel (I’m afraid that David Keel and Tara King don’t qualify as ‘classic’), but it turns out that we have to go back much further than the 1960s to find the daughter of Agamemnon who helped her brother Orestes to avenge their father’s murder. The name puts me in mind of the winning clue for TREACLE in Ximenes comp 997 by ‘Mrs B. Lewis’ (the pseudonym of Dorothy Taylor, which was subsequently used by Colin Dexter for Morse’s sidekick), “Material for a black confection that might become ???????”, with its reference to Eugene O’Neill’s reworking of the story.

17a Do without occasionally antiwar Christian (5)
A name for the first note of the scale, now almost invariably called ‘do’, contains (‘without’) alternate letters selected from ‘antiwar’ (ie ‘antiwar occasionally’).

20a Aardvark hater turned corner (8)
The (5-3) answer is the result of an anagram (‘turned’) of HATER plus a word meaning ‘to take or use selfishly’, although whether ‘corner’ is a valid synonym is open to question. A ‘corner’ involves a syndicate buying up all the available stock in the market or available supply of a commodity, thus forcing speculative sellers into a corner, such that they can only fulfil their obligations by buying from the corner-men at an inflated price. The term ‘to corner’ can certainly be used figuratively in a broadly similar context, eg ‘he cornered the market in scented tie-clips’, but I’ve never seen it used in a wider sense. The Chambers Thesaurus does give the word here under the verb ‘corner’, but, as I have noted before, many of the synonyms in that work range from distinctly questionable to just plain wrong.

22a Vast number from Pakistan and India, and smaller number from East in opposition (8)
A three-letter word for 100,000 rupees or an indefinitely vast number (‘vast number from Pakistan’), the letter represented in the IRSA by ‘India’, and a four-letter word for ‘something small of its type’ are all reversed (‘from East’).

26a Caterpillar falling short on account of being late (5)
The word ON (from the clue) missing its last letter (‘falling short’) precedes a shortened form of an eight-letter ‘account of a dead person’ (ie ‘account of being late’, where ‘being’ has the meaning of ‘person’).

29a Filling food carried by Yodel? (8)
A four-letter word which can describe food generally – although among nautical folk it is usually either ‘hard’ (ships’ biscuit) or ‘soft’ (bread) – is contained by a verb which broadly describes what a yodeller would do (hence the question mark). The Yodel brand ceased to exist on 17 July this year, so I hope the food arrives ok. Still, it could have been with Evri…

34a Ultimately, hint to crack puzzle proves incorrect (6)
The last letter (‘ultimately’) of ‘hint’ is contained by (‘cracks’) the name for the sort of puzzle where a word or words are represented by a combination of pictures, sometimes with single letters crossed out or added. I remember that there used to be a pop-themed puzzle of this type every week in Disc magazine, the one for Captain Beefheart being particularly memorable.

Down

4d Deny access after one loses head (6)
I’m afraid that this clue is unsound – as the wordplay is written, it can only be the four-letter word for ‘[a means of] access’ which loses its first letter (‘head’). The intended interpretation, though, is that this four-letter word comes after the word ONE, lacking its first letter – this would correctly be indicated by something along the lines of ‘Deny access, faced with one losing head’. While the word ‘after’ in the surface reading is a conjunction, in order to achieve the required juxtaposition in the cryptic reading it must be a preposition, but a preposition cannot introduce a main clause – it must relate the subject to the object, as in ‘driver behind learner loses patience’, which can only mean that the driver is losing patience. In crosswordese, the use of a participle instead of a main verb offers the setter welcome ambiguity: ‘driver behind learner losing patience’ could mean that either the driver or the learner loses patience – although in normal language we would take this example to mean ‘[a] driver behind [a] learner [is] losing patience’, it could also legitimately be interpreted as ‘[a] driver [is] behind [a] learner losing patience’.

7d Chuck about what’s inside of dried mud (7)
An anagram (‘about’) of CHUCK is followed by the word ‘what’ deprived of its first and last letters, ie “what’s inside”. The word ‘of’, required by the definition, rather spoils the surface reading.

12d Shake can (4)
A double-definition clue, the first definition wherein prompted a regular correspondent to suggest that “James Bond might raise an eyebrow” about the clue, given his very clear views about how a Martini should be prepared. Absolutely right, although in a non-physical sense both ‘shake’ and the answer have a shared meaning of ‘rouse’, so the clue is fine.

16d Fruit provider to go around every trustee (9)
A three-letter word meaning ‘to go’, or euphemistically speaking ‘to answer the call of nature’, contains (‘around’) a four-letter word meaning ‘every’ and a two-letter abbreviation for ‘trustee’. The answer is (5-4).

21d Extremely dim bully clinging to one stone (7)
A four-letter word of US origin meaning ‘to subject to cruel horseplay’, particularly used in relation to the practices of college students, containing (‘clinging to’) the Roman numeral representing ‘one’ is followed by the usual abbreviation for ‘stone’. Do ‘dim’ and the four-letter adjective from which the answer is formed share a meaning? Just about, I would say.

23d Definitely not Iron Man’s core breaking circuit (6, 2 words)
The chemical symbol for iron and the middle letter (‘core’) of ‘Man’ are contained by the sort of logic circuit that delivers an ON only if all its inputs are OFF. The answer is (2,4).

25d American constitution restricting Express and associated organs (6)
The usual abbreviation for ‘American’ precedes a three-letter abbreviation from the world of chemistry which has come to figuratively represent the essence or constitution of a thing, containing (‘restricting’) the two-letter abbreviation for ‘express’.

27d Casually throw old purse to pay broken Australian (4)
A quadruple-definition clue which relies on the second, third, fourth and fifth headwords in Chambers. Incorporating the first, sixth and seventh headwords is left to the reader as an exercise…go on, there hasn’t been a clue writing comp for ages…

(definitions are underlined)

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18 Responses

  1. Alex says:

    ‘How many prepositions, conjunctions and adverbs can dance on the head of an invisicomma?’ We’re a bit closer to an answer now.ย  Joking aside, I thoroughly enjoyed this knowledgeable and informative discussion on the finer points of wordplay grammar/syntax. Someone’s got to do it and you won’t find it anywhere else.That’s partly why I come here. I do think though, that 4d, as it stands, probably passes the oft-quoted ‘fairness’ test for the average Gemelo solver, notwithstanding its dubious technical validity.

    • Doctor Clue says:

      Yes, I doubt whether 4d will have caused a single eyebrow to have been raised among the solving community – to say that the point is a nicety is perhaps bigging it up! But I too enjoyed the discussion.

      The answer to your question, I need hardly say, is 42.

  2. RJHe says:

    It’s exceptionally rare for me to find myself at odds with the good Dr C, but I must express my disagreement with his classification of 4dn as a ‘plonker’. To attain true plonker status, the clue would have to be worded along the lines of: “Deny one loses head access”, whose cryptic reading (ignore the quasi-nonsensical surface reading) is clearly grammatically unsound. To render the clue sound one would need to either change the main verb to its present participle form – “Deny one losing head access” – or insert a preposition, eg “Deny one loses head before access”. As it stands, however, 4dn does in fact contain a preposition (“after”) which I would argue renders the clue perfectly sound. While I can see that imagining two invisicommas in the wordplay part (“access, after one, loses head”) would suggest that it’s the synonym of “access” that should lose its initial letter, it’s surely equally valid to imagine just one invisicomma (“access, after one loses head”) thereby allowing the solver to read the clue in the manner intended by Gemelo.

    • Doctor Clue says:

      I think I was wrong when I described it as a ‘plonker’, although it does have certain plonkerish overtones.

      In the cryptic reading, we are asked to interpret ‘A after B’ as indicating juxtaposition of the two elements, with A coming after B. This could be validated by multiple senses of ‘after’ in Chambers, eg ‘behind in place’, ‘following in order’, ‘subsequent to’ etc, but what these all have in common is that they are prepositional expressions, and therefore cannot introduce a main clause; such a construction is only possible with ‘after’ when, as in the surface reading, it functions as a conjunction. Equivalent wordplays using other prepositions, eg ‘access behind one loses head’ and ‘access following one loses head’ (with or without commas), make the problem more evident.

      I will update my observation to more clearly reflect the issue as I see it.

      • RJHe says:

        You’re absolutely right, of course, that “after” in 4dn is a conjunction rather than a preposition, and your new explanation makes the distinction clear (I think ๐Ÿ˜‰ ). However, I still think the wordplay as it stands is basically sound if one imagines just one invisicomma rather than two. How would you feel had Gemelo worded it: “Deny having access after one loses head”?

        • Doctor Clue says:

          Are you suggesting an invisicomma that produces ‘Deny // having access after, one loses head’, with ‘after’ being an adverb? The inclusion of ‘having’ or ‘with’ would certainly make that a more reasonable inference. Yes, I think I would have let that pass!

          • RJHe says:

            My mental invisicomma, if any, would again have come after “access”, but it just goes to show there’s often more than one way to skin a cat. Interesting discussion (well, to you and me at least ๐Ÿ˜‰ ).

            • Doctor Clue says:

              I can’t see how the unpunctuated string ‘after one loses head’ can be grammatically sound when ‘after’ is required to indicate that the order of the elements is to be reversed, not that one thing happens at a later time than another. In the former sense, ‘after’ is equivalent to ‘behind’, and ‘behind one loses head’ doesn’t work for me, while ‘having access behind, one loses head’ seems fine. But it’s certainly an interesting discussion, and one which highlights how much the solver infers (consciously or not) when resolving a typical wordplay.

        • Monk says:

          No, this is all very interesting from the wings. How about “Deny access when confronted by topless individual”? I certainly would!

  3. Paul says:

    While I was working through this puzzle, Gemelo’s 44th, I wondered if he might celebrate his half-century with a clue-writing competition; then, when I had finished, I saw your own cri de coeur and uttered a silent “Hear, hear.” I actually quite enjoyed this puzzle and I really liked the “Do without” in 17A. Do you think the “falling short” in 26A is doing double duty, referring to the “on” and to the appreciation of the deceased person? Or is the four letter version of the latter so well-established it does not need to be indicated as an abbreviation?

    • Doctor Clue says:

      Hi Paul – I believe that the four-letter form with the required sense can definitely be used without qualification, as could ‘bike’, ‘fridge’ and ‘info’, all similarly shown by Chambers as ‘short form of…’.

      I too thought it was an entertaining puzzle, but every month that we don’t get a clue-writing comp I subtract another mark for keeping us waiting!

  4. Debra says:

    Baffled by 2 down

    • Doctor Clue says:

      Hi Debra

      2d Precious jade turned up in Chinese and European blue mineral (6). A two-letter word for precious jade (which could be cryptically indicated by ‘tips for you’) is reversed (‘turned up’) in a three-letter word for the native Chinese people (and the dynasty which ruled for over 400 years from 206 BC). This combination is followed by the usual abbreviation for ‘European’. The answer is a weird-looking word with a dieresis on the third letter. Hope that helps.

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